Two New Pages in the Story

Ok so I've added two new pages and it builds up the story better, but these new pages seem quite "raw" to me - especially as the other 26 pages have been fine tuned over months and months. I read it last night to my son at bedtime and it went down well, but the new text feels a bit sticky to me. I'll see if I can smooth it out before emailing it to the printers.