Wednesday, 4 March 2009

Two New Pages in the Story

Ok so I've added two new pages and it builds up the story better, but these new pages seem quite "raw" to me - especially as the other 26 pages have been fine tuned over months and months. I read it last night to my son at bedtime and it went down well, but the new text feels a bit sticky to me. I'll see if I can smooth it out before emailing it to the printers.

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