Monday, 2 March 2009

Feedback on Tortoise George

My friend (Ph.D, M.Sc linguistics etc) emailed me back the feedback and from a technical point of view I think it's sound. The biggest area for improvement which I agree with is the lack of build up as to why the mouse deserves what he gets. So, I've decided to add two pages to further illustrate exactly how selfish the mouse is.

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