Advance Information for There's a Bear on my Roof

Here's the Advance Information sheet for There's a Bear on my Roof - same template as the last one of course. It's a challenge to squeeze all the vital info into one sheet of A4. It effect it's the ad for the book so it has to be good. If you've done one of these before please let me know what could be improved - positive feedback is flattering but I really need to hear the constructive criticism so I can improve.