On the advice of my wife I'm toning down the scariness of the key page in Tortoise George. The original illustration was that of a very scary cat with fangs and claws all out, pouncing out from behind a bush.
The new illustration (which you'll have to wait for) has the cat much more covered up. To compensate for this I've put the cats ears in an illustration two pages earlier to add some menace to the story.
Once it's online I'll try to gauge buyers responses and maybe scare-up the illustrations for the second release.