Here's the first draft of the rhyme at the end of Tortoise George. It's intended to be a kind of summary of the story.
I've noticed that a lot of picture books end abruptly, and the ones that work the best have some kind of epilogue, whether a few words or a picture which the parent can use to say a few more words about the story.
Cheese is yellow
And tastes nice
And when you share
It’s twice as nice
The same is true
With ice cream
Share with friends
And faces beam
When you share
Friends share too
So pass it on
Good for you
Copyright (c) Smallfish Books 2009
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